very good! tops even your last one! Great work!

i will call your name if you wish:

ValkyrInsane !!!!!!!

Beautiful

a little something i've just wrote! enjoy if it's worth it!

all the same

Leave my house,
walk down the street,
hands in the pocket,
the face put down,

take a walk,
gone outside,
just to see,
if anyone is there,
there for me,

grab the key,
open the car,
behind the wheel,
start the engine,

take a drive,
drive outside,
just to see,
if anyone is there,
there for me,

drive the streets,
stop the car,
in the heart of the city,
walk again,

take a walk,
gone inside,
just to find out,
if anybody is here,
here for me,

take a look,
noone there,
walk further,
trough this dream,

just walking,
to go outside,
nothing to see,
nobody to find,
noone for me,

strange people,
strange faces,
they got no time,
fast moving everywhere,

i'm lost here,
lost in this town,
in this world,
no place for me,
back where i started,

grab the key,
open the car,
behind the wheel,
start the engine,

driving home again,
nothing more to explore,
all the same as yesterday,
strange as ever,
the worlds gone mad.

The End of the World? check this out!

Apocalypse

Everything is gone,
the world is dead,
they droped the bomb,

what's not dead now
will be soon,
no place left,
where we could live,
all has faded,

they droped their load,
no flowers left,
not one tree,
citys turned to dust,

nothing to eat,
nothing to drink,
it's all atomic,

what was it all about?
don't know anymore,
didn't make sense,
just for the cause,
they killed everything,

if your alive,
wish for fast dead,
memorys destroyed,
families torn apart,

beloved and hated ones
are all gone,
dosen't matter anymore,

few humans left alive,
i can see no future,
mankind has failed,
all hope is lost,
tears in my eyes,

years to go,
without the sun,
will we survive,
I don't know.

hope is lost these days!

Valkyr-that rocked.

Sarek-awesome, as always.

RubbishRose-Your turn!

LOL..... is it a fight?

Hey ... I also play guitar I can't write all the time....
But here is an old one... and I know my old ones are not that great.
BUT YOU WANT IT !!!!!!!!!!! AND NOW YOU GET IT!
[its simple punkrock stuff]

Reason

1.
You wake up this morning and you know,
it will be another bad day for you.
Your mother don’t supported your band,
You girl is not longer your girlfriend.

R.
Is this just the moment,
is this the right time?
Think about your acting,
Give me just one more sign.

2.
Until the day grows on you feeling sad,
there is a big yellow stain in your bed.
Your friends deny your friendship.
And your heart is broke on every other hit.
(from your father)

R.
Is this just the moment,
is this the right time?
Can I try to help you,
or have you cross the line?

3.
After school, nobody is at home.
Your brain becomes a deadly empty zone.
Does the knife will make a scary sound?
Suicide becames your last way out.

R.
Is this just the moment,
is this the right time?
Are you feeling better,
when you fucking die?

***
correct me.....

Oh, thx, SAREK ! Eh.. No need ,to call me like a Santa Claus on New Year!
I'm already here! As always, still annoying!
to rubbishrose:
that's very cool,man! I really like it!

glad that your back on again, was boring without you really!

@rubbishrose-vocals
real good one ! like it

"boring without me?"
Really,SAREK? Hooo... It's make me laugh!

Last Summer

Down by the lake,
near the old house,
thats where we met,
for one summer,

ask for your dreams,
told you my story,
it was meant to be,

I took your hands,
put your lips to mine,
acting like lovers,

we lay under the stars,
so close to each other,
a wispher would be a noise,

got back home,
dreaming of you,
can't get it right,
must know the truth,

call you on the phone,
to tell you what i feel,
you got very quiet,

it's too much for you,
everything too fast,
you just don't know,

can't understand you,
was it all just a game?
i thought i knew you,

I had been so wrong,
you just wanted to play,
my heart is broken,
and torn apart,

my love i have wasted,
you said you still like me,
but i don't care anymore,

i had been fooled again,
i got the scars again,
lost a chance again,

crying into sleep,
dreaming of those nights,
was to perfect to be true,

Sarek you have done many many poems and they are all good ones. Great job all poets here.

thank you very much!

Great..... I love poems which tell a story.
No a new one from me. I wrote it in school today.

Black Clouds

Awkward head-aches
caused by painful truth.
Screaming silence
caused by hate, lies, death and you.

I'm lying here in chains.
Your heart don't set me free.
No struggle, no fight.
No scream for help
and my feelings are hide.

I'm drowning in the rain of the black clouds.
And I fear,
If I reach the ground
you won't be there.

The prison you've built for me,
is full of blood and tears.
Full of metaphors and silent visitors.
They see that I'm here,
see that I'm becoming nervous.
Know that I'm the victim
and you are my earthquake.

Why they don't ask me
where I belong to.
Why they opened the cage although
I don't want to go.
Do they know?
Do they know...
_____
correct me

you surely mean drowning? (untergehen)
Metaphern? was zur hölle sind Metaphern? iregendwas lyrisches? ich versteh no nicht mal deutsch! menno!
it is great, love the impression of being caged! 9+ i would say!

@ SAREK
Meinste das ernst das du nicht weißt was 'Metaphern' sind?
Ja es heißt 'ertrinken'...

yep natürlich hab ich das wort schon mal gehört aber ich weis nicht was so doofe metaphern in deinem Käfig zu suchen haben!

@SAREK
Ja Methapern sind ja Sinnbilder...... und wo ICH in diesem Gefängnis bin gibts halt viele Dinge(Bsp.: Karge herunter gekommende Wände als Sinnbild für die langsam zerbrechenden Gefühle ...) die MICH an etwas erinnern. Praktisch 'der Stein des Anstosses' für alte Erinnerungen.
Ich hoffe du verstehst jetzt wie ich's meine....

aha! now i fully understand what you where trying to say! it suits well!
thanx for teaching me!

Yeah I'm your teacher, little slave ^^.

ah don't make blush to late

this one is crap, but still some kind of poetry!

Murder

fear in your eyes,
take your last breath,
soon you will be gone,

i brought you here,
to this place of fear,
i can see your tears,

no where to run to,
left alone in the cold,
i found you there,

took your hand,
lead you here,
to this land of fear,

wish you stayed,
but now you'r here,
no chance to leave,

you are my love,
till the morning comes,
soon you will leave,

like all the others did,
they all left me here,
and so will you my dear,

i wipe away your tears,
i will kiss your lips,
and ease your pain,

madness they will say,
murder they will scream,
won't help you at all,

you'r allready gone,
how nice of me,
to let you leave,

no need to walk,
you will float,
to eternety,

free at last,
dead is so calm,
you passed away,

Want some more? Here you go:

I know you well

i know you well,
the way you look,
the way you talk,
the way you breath,

is telling me:
you want to leave,
there is to much hurt,
you can't stand it anymore,
your Love is lost,

always i was your friend,
nothing you couldn't tell,
i understand you well,
your heart torn apart,

i know you well,
the way you look,
the way you talk,
the way you breath,

is telling me:
he left you alone again,
you wanted to trust,
but now you'r lost,
fooled once again,

nothing there i could say,
to ease your pain,
lean on my shoulder,
don't hide your tears,

i know you well,
the way you look,
the way you talk,
the way you breath,

is telling me:
you'r angry at yourself,
for believing his lies,
for wanting this love so bad,
for crying at it now,

let it all out,
you will love again!
if i just could tell you,
i was waiting here
all the time,

and i will wait for you,
till the day you see,
i was here for you,
for all this time,

i know you well,
the way you look,
the way you talk,
the way you breath,

Visit http://www.pretty-poems.de.vu ... You know all the poems but you could watch them again...(and make my counter feel happy)

and don't miss out on the forum, some new lyrics from me there!

A strange one, i can't explain this to you it's to cruel! very strange, i think i'm getting a little insane!

RED to WHITE

Like the pain i feel inside,
like the stars shining bright,
like the air we breath tonight,
my blood freezes inside,

open wounds, the blood runs,
down on my clothes, it drys up,
but it still flowts, it flows,
my blood freezing on me,

i don't want to belive in god,
cause i don't want to be pushed down,
and i don't want to go to hell
cause i don't want to burn for eternety,

i don't like to see your lovless smile,
i like the red blood running down on you,
all over your Face, all over you,
red blood turns to white,

i bet the pain you feel is burning hot,
hot inside you, your blood inside,
the cruel black night is getting white,
as midnight turns to day,

your green eyes seem like paradise,
to someone like me, but
the colour that i like ist white!
and soon enough red turns to white.

I specially like the first verse...

my favourite is the third one. did you read the one i put on your side? it's the original.

ja/yes/oui

ACK! I'm in class and I have to read all these poems! I'll never catch up! AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!





Really, I'm okay, I just haven't had my dose of caffeine, yet.