Do ya really want??? No problem

yeah i like it like that

Funny

Your little hamster buddy is soon going to die of lead poisoning...isn't that enough?

Hey ValkyrInsane your poem is so fuckin cool.........
RESPECT!

Thanks,man.
Ehhh... If you just hear how this song sounds...

very nice poems, here, i'm impressed!

keep it up!

Impreess me someone MORE!!!!

I'll have you know that is a graphite pencil

I wish that POTF would see all this poems. They were sooooo proud, to have so creative fans.

@ ValkyrInsane : You've already read my poem?

Yeah,man. That's great,just my profile - I like such "dark" motives. It's really cool.
RESPECT!!!

Yeah thx
'dark things' are the best............ for lyrics

Oh,yeah,for lyrics! Thats right!
Do ya have more poems?

roses are red
violets are blue
this poem smells
just like you.

yeah of course... but the most are in german(my language) and the other are simple punkrock songs..... and they are full of mistakes....
Yet, I'm writing @ another poem......

Hey,man,my sister speaks german! So, if o'cause want, can show me, I'll translate! So I'm writing now a poem too....

@rubbishrose-vocals

was bedeutet "cares" in deiner signatur? kann es sein das du care meinst im sinne von kümmern? ich bin auch nicht gerade der englisch king, würd mich interesieren. meinst du wir sollten hier mal poems in deutsch posten? macht wohl wenig sinn oder? aber wenn dus tust tu ichs auch

@all the others out there

dont be upset by me writing a reply in my language, because i just wanted to ask rubbishrose-vocals, the german meaning of a word in his signature, and to ask this in english would be doomed, because of my english!

@ SAREK
lass uns das ma da ( http://www.poetsofthefall.com/forum/vie ... =6894#6894 ) reinhaun.
Achso und thanks wegen 'cares' immer diese Fehler. Heißt natürlich 'care'.

@ ValkyrInsane
look @ http://www.poetsofthefall.com/forum/vie ... =6894#6894
for the german poem

This is a another one:

Can't be insane again

Strange ideas in your head
Trying to be like all
Since the moment you've been dead
So much time had gone

City lights blind your eyes
Wanna forget mad past
Think when you'll see daylight
Will find your happiness at last

Can't be insane again

Thru the alleys and parks
You're walking all alone
Foolish hoping on the luck
You will not find your home

But while the night falls on the streets
Salvation will be come
And memories your heart will keep
When your dreams was your gun

P.S.: Sorry for my english if something wrong! SORRY!!

Again.... soooooo cool

Ehm..... how old are you?
I'm 16.

So here's another one. I wrote it today in a few minutes. I'm still not sure what's it about . PLZ correct my mistakes. I want to have a 'right' poem.

Moment Of Vanity

I'm feeling alone.
Like a cedar-tree in the middle,
of the black crowd.
Like snaring music boxes,
like I have no doubt.

But I do...
I'm here with it
Is it here with you?

The war inside your heart left signs
of destruction.
The veils of mist in the trees of your eyes,
are no exceptions.

Ignore the warning signs,
look in the bright headlights.
This is your journey,
your nightmare.
This is your journey,
your nightmare.

I kiss you,
It's got the flavour
of bloody self-conceit.
Are you ever trembel?
Were your eyes are open wide?

You wanna see devils face?
if he creeps here at your side?
Whisper to you, takes your breath,
your beating heart,
at the dying candle light.

They last leaf is dancing patiently,
in the autumn sun...
You lying here, emotionless,
where no tomorrow comes.

Dance with me
You intangible wonders
For good or ill
You can't catch me

OH!! Shit,man, it's cool!!! You really impress me,rubbishrose-vocals!
Eh... I'm an old man! I'm 21...

ValkyrInsane and rubbishrose-vocals I want to say that you have similar style. Your poems full of life and senses. They remind me Max Payne story! Great work guys! I suppose that it is hard write poems on not your native language, isn't it?

Ehm... It's not so hard, Skylark. Raelly not. Just... If ya want to speak not native language,just learn to think on it! And no problems,my friend! Well,poem is a poem, you must live by poetry to write poems,if you ask me.
Anyway, thanks,Skylark! I'm glad that you like it!

@ the old man, ValkyrInsane :
Hey man. There are not many persons who impress and inspire me with poems. Let me think...ehm.... Poets Of The Fall, of course, blink-182/boxcar racer ('There Is' is brilliant), Good Charlotte('Emotionless' is the song why I start writing poems/songs), Max Payne... mhhh...... maybe the german band 'the Wohlstandskinder'.... and you... .....
But the biggggest inspiration is the normal life(this fact I've got from Mark). Normal situations. ==> The veils of mist in the trees of your eyes,
==> I was drivin' with bike to school. It was very cold and very early in the morning. There was a little foggy forest next to me. And it looks so mystical... The connection with the eyes..... Have you ever look in somebodys eyes while he is 'miles away', you talk to him or her but he/she isn't listing? I bet you know this. So I put these 2 things together.
That's how I write my poems. You have to be open for everything beautiful.

@ all the others
Big Thanx that you read my poems.... and maybe even love it.......
I'm really proud, right now

To learn to think on english I need to have big experience speaking on it and have great stock of words. I'm just trying to do this. Actually sometime I use Lingvo vocabulary to express my opinions. But I see progress for last year in english. You right - human just need to live poetry to write poem!
Yes, I said truth about your poems!!!

Well, I think that it is my last post today in this year.

I try to think in pictures or situations...

Happy New Year Everybody !

To rubbishrose-vocals
Y'know,man, you impress me very much too. And I can say the same thing about there not many poeple who can impress me.
Eh... It's hard to say how I write my poems,I just spend many time alone and becouse of it I have now a "certain" station of my soul... hehe... Some people just hated me they said I'm real insane jerk! Well it influenced me pretty much... And many,many of other factors.

I'm not often alone. But I'm an 'Alone-Person'. I like to sit at home, thinking, asking my self the same questions again and again. Maybe thats weird. ... But not for me. I'm proud of myself and I fuck off what people say. I think that's important.
... A guy who write poems like you did, isn't insane. You (and maybe me ) be a prophet! And I think there should be more people like you.
...mhhh maybe someone could think I'm gay - but I'm not
It's just cool to find people who are a bit like me. Coz thats very rare.

Over & Out

See you guys next year. 2005

This is an really old one, i must have wrote this when i was 16 or 17 years old. but it still moves me in some way!

a normal Day!?

The fog is coming up,
the clouds are hanging low,
the immortals cross your way,
the hawk is killed by crows.

You hear a cry that cuts the quiet morning,
where is the sun?
where is the blue sky?
where are all the people that you've
seen just a moment ago?
where are all the kids kept playing?

Is this the normal day?
What has happend with the wolrd?
We got to do something, to stop that!
But you keep on denying,
keep on pretending that its just the normal day.

Your mind gets dark,
you don't realize the danger.
There is a war outside your house!
The normal Day?

Where is the light in the mind of all the people?
where is the freedom in this world?
Is this the day?
the apocalypse?
wich the prophets had seen in their visons?
Or is it really just the normal Day?

Is this the normal day?
What has happend with the wolrd?
We got to do something, to stop that!
But you keep on denying,
keep on pretending that its just the normal day.