"the hawk is killed by crows. "
Nice imagine...

How old are you now?

24, and i'm feeling young still!
I,ve wrote most of my poems(i'd loved to just call them "Texte" )
when i was still in school. the ones i write now are mostly about pain, love and desparation!

aahh just like the old days!

My World is dark,
because there is nobody here,
there is no spark,
no light of hope for me here,

I'm driffting all the time,
desperatly in Love,
you will never be mine,
no chance for Love,

I can see no light in front of me,
only darkness in my way,
Lovers we could never be,
our paths divieded there is no way,

I feel so alone here on my own,
why can't we be togehter?
feelings as cold as a stone,
never we will be together!

how i wish you would free me,
trapped here in this room,
can't we just leave it all and flee?
my doom is just this lonely room.

Never will i hold your Hand,
Never will you understand,
This world for me is just a lonely Land,
why can't you understand?

My Love is running cold,
Nobody will ever recive it exept you,
Noone there i will ever hold,
I'm in this state because of you,

Desperate for your love,
desperate for just one look,
Nothing anyone can do,
cause i'm lost in you.

i just wrote this, and i mean just in the second the words arrived in my mind i put them here. hope you like it! by the way, i name this poem "Lost in you".

Sooooo.......
It's pretty short and I don't like it that much but here it is...

Nights Above You

You're the widow of your slowly shattering life.
But you celebrate you burning past, like sunrise.
You've choosen the easiest way.
Although it pushs you too far away.
[Too far away... Away from me]

You eyes searching for shelter,
while your heart become timid and stand-offish.
Your walking thru the gardens and alleys of your lost memories.
They try to draw your attention to
you hidden power. But you don't see.

And now your life is so far away...
Like these nights above you,
and this dream about you and me.

NOTICE: PLZ tell me your opinions & my faults. This song is about 'The good old time'... I think we miss them all.
..... Some other thing: I'm just creative if I'm in a bad mood... but hey(!) I've got holidays. So don't be so hard.
Good Night !

@rubbishrose-vocals
once again i must realize that my english is in a very bad state! could you please tell me the german meaning for ? as far as i can understand it, i like it. i think its not too short!

I will give you some poetry, here we go.
Blue sky in the air, let me smell it one again, ya ya beat beat

Also "timitd and stand-offish" heißt "scheu und abweisend".

I don't know why but I don't like this poem......... mhhhhhh I think it's too simple. But maybe good for a song.

i got a poem right here from a very famous band, sadly they never published the song! and to avoid any misunderstandings: this poem right here is written by Bono from U2. maybe it doesent belong here but i'll put it here, hope you like it as much as i do.

U2 - Wild Irish Rose

In a field by a river
my love and I did lie
And on my naked shoulder
she's too proud to cry
She said that I must leave her
an icy tear she froze
How could I melt the heart
Of a Wild Irish Rose

Well a gypsy she has made of me
A servent of the street
And back to bed I've travelled
To taste a love as sweet
Well the heart it knows no reasons
And reason never knows
As I lie with them I'm thinking
Of a Wild Irish Rose

Well I saw the city of angels
It brought a devil out in me
And Hell's hotel on Sunset
Showed a whore no mercy
As the orange sky was screaming
From the roof I let her go
These are the dizzying heights that brought me
My Wild Irish Rose

Now red is the rose
That she layed on my grave
A life is what she wanted
And a life I surely gave
Like a hundred men before me
They lay lying here in rows
Young men, bloody
As a Wild Irish Rose

Written by Bono and the EDGE in the late 80's /early 90's and brodcastet on TV in ireland in 93 i belive.

Very nice! Rubbish Rose, I think you're very expressive and talented! That last one was great! If you absolutely have to be critiqued, the only thing I'd change is "get's." First, get's isn't a contraction, so there's no apostrophe. And gets is okay but I think the word "becomes" is better. Oh, and in the 2nd verse, the second-to-last line doesn't need an apostrophe either, as there's no natural pause from one line to the next.

Other than that (and the spelling, but now I'm getting anal) it's beautiful!







This has been an episode of me getting technical. Tune in next time where I don't give a rip!

Yeah thx.
Finally a guy who corrects me.
I wasn't sure wich word fits better.... I choose the wrong one .

What do you mean?

BIG Thx for your praise...

@ SAREK: Mhhhhh..... maybe a nice lyric but I don't like U2 at all......
But you are a great artist ^^

This is another. I wrote it today mornig,when waked up from a terrible nightmare...

Doesn't Devil have a heart?

You are the only who looked in my eyes,
You are the only who still not deny,
You was there,when crows pecked my flesh,
When hangmans tried to burn me to ash,
Your tears cured old scars on my soul,
Your hugs made me feel not alone,

Doesn't Devil have a heart?
All my world just fall apart,
Warmth of your fond hands,
Is all that can make sense.

On the street, people spat in your face,
Soon you become exile from their race,
But you,obstinate, keep on to love me,
And you're not afraid to become lonely.

I wanted to tell you, my nature is sin!
A fallen angel can't be your dream!
But I cannot stop this burning inside,
When you just touch me I'm loosing my mind.

Doesn't Devil have a heart?
All my world just fall apart,
Warmth of your fond hands,
Is all that can make sense.

sorry for my english... hehe...

Again...really great........
I want these nightmares, too .

I can give it to ya!

@ValkyrInsane
"Doesn't Devil have a heart?" is the best poem here so far. I like it very much, and i love your english. you know i just think its sharp, its to the edge, no describing around a feeling just put it in words, its rough its pur, i love it. i bow to you man

WOW!.. hehe... thanks,man!... I haven't heard such words for a long time ago...
Again... thanks,thanks so much!...

sooo horny, horny horny, horny
Nooooo keep your dreams ^^.

I've got one question...
I cut your wings up
Is that wrong english?
PLZ answer quick.....

ich schneide deine Flügel auf?

i cut your wings off, seems better

Yeah, that's right english!..
Both phrases are right... But "cut your wings up" is more "rough"... I like it...

P.S.: That's my job - to give nightmares!

@rubbishrose-vocals
if you really want to express, that your cutting somebodys wings up, i would write: i cut your wings open, cause up means more often higher in a opposite way to down as lower. hope this helps you in some way

you deserve it, really its so cool, perfect.

*turn red in the face*

*whisper* thanks...

Thx @ you two. By the way, I think SAREK is right... You can call yourself a fuckin Poet !!!!!!!!!!!!

Rape In Heaven

You've cursed me with you lips.
I'm paralysed but my finger tips
at your skin. At your fotograph.
It becomes blurred, in the blood of my gunshot wound.
You've crossed the edge and I followed you.
Your the witch, I'm your entreaty victim.
Burn me up, redeem me.
Don't let me sin.
Here in heaven. Here with you.

I know you need me, but you deny.
I'm behind the mirror,you've looked in, I'm in your mind.
I'm crawling out now. I'm in your room.
Your view gets scared. You are confused.
One last decision I have to made.
I cut your wings off, to descerate
you.

NOTICE: It's about loving a girl sooo much. But she don't loves you. It could drives you mad. Okay you know about my bad englisch....... so feel free to correct me ! THX @ EVERYBODY

short and sweet man!

WOW!... It's fuckin' cool,man! So emotionaly!...
Congratulations!!! You can call yourself a fuckin' Poet too!

P.S.: Doesn't devil have a heart? is actually about me... only.... nobody loves me so much...

poor boy! but you will find your match everybody will, some just take more time than the others! cheer up man, at least we are with you

Thx.
Well 'Rape In Heaven' is not about me ^^ but Moment Of Vanity.
If think every POTF Fan is an great person. We are all beautifull and good in bed. (*just joking*)

just joking? maybe you, but for me it's true!

I know it, I know it,man!.. YOU are all that have for now!
Just please, don't call me a "poor boy", my former girl called me like that, we just separated very bad...

oops, never again i will say somthing like that to you! i promise